History 202

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  1. aunderwood
    Feb 17, 2011 @ 17:34:40

    This is a good start. The Atlantic World does infer a specific time period that ends in the 19th century, however, I like how you interweaved all of this history. Make sure you introduce and conclude the topic. You must edit and proofread carefully, employing traditional writing techniques. If you mention the Harlem Renaissance or the Italian Renaissance, you must define these historical terms for the reader. I would advise that you rewrite this.

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